LO4/5 Revised Production Plan with Information of the Groups Contributions

Original Production Plan

Revised Production Plan (Improved/Developed)

As you can see below the improvements that have be made to the production plan are varied. The most notable of which is the amount of detail that the production schedule now contains, for example
the improved production schedule now contains all the correct dates for the deadlines and the dates in which the activities was completed, another improvement is the general manner in which the form is now presented (professionally) this is done through the use of fulls sentences rather than one-three word answers.

LO3 Questionnaire Feedback

Questionnaire Feedback;

What we Took Away From the Feedback;
What we learned from the questionnaire feedback was that our strengths was that our idea was clear and easily understood and that our weaknesses was that we needed more information on the Ofcom guidelines and that on some sections we dragged it on for too long.

LO3/4 Received Feedback from Tutor Based Upon the Unit in General

Received Feedback Based Upon the Unit in General

A group or revised treatment document with annotation to show group contribution.	This is present but it is unclear.
A pitch document/presentation/handout with evidence of creation and contributions by group.	Again this is present. Annotate and demonstrate how you developed the idea from the treatment into the final pitched product
Blog post reflecting on your experience of the pitch.	Present
Evidence of feedback	Present – but you need to feed forward on this to show you acted on this before re-developing the treatment
Revised treatment and production plan.	This again is present in the Sheffield Live! Format but does not go into enough detail to meet requirement. E.g. music played should cover specific bands, albums and whether or not royalty costs would be incurred and what they were.
Blog post reflecting on the process and the future developments you would make with your AMP.	Not present at all.

Joe,

The blog itself needs organising with all the pieces in the right section.  The pieces above reflect the missing parts of Lo3 and Lo4. If you look at the example blog I sent on Monday this will help you lay out the blog in the right way

LO3 Treatment for our Pitched Idea Anime Half-Hour

LO3 Lesson Review/Objectives

Lesson Review
In this lesson I made sure I uploaded the presentation slides for the marker/teacher to see them and I also made sure I produced and uploaded a mood board for our finalised idea 'Anime Half-Hour' to meet another requirement of Unit 19 LO3. 

Objectives
The objectives for my next lesson it to ensure that I have a treatment for our finalised idea 'Anime Half-Hour' and that is up to the standards required of me and that of the unit.

LO3 Moodboard for our Unit 19 Final Idea

LO3 Presentation Slides for Finalised Idea